Sunday 18 November 2012

Chapter one
Strange Memories

Draco looked in the distance. Another day of training by willow, a Dragon of Fire. He looked in the distance remembering Li,his owner in China. He remembered the time when dragons were China's royal pet. It was peacful with Li until Shadow,a dragon who took the place as Evil Team Leader from Cackle the Queen of evil dragons.  She became the deputy because she was too old. Shadow was smart and told the other evil team members to disguise themselves like the dragons from China and attack China!

Twenty people died during the attack. The chinese emperor was so furious that he sent the dragons from China away. Draco wanted to forget this memory but that meant he would forget Li. Draco's older brother Firebreath was the leader of a Fire Team. You may be thinking why would Draco want to be a dragon of fire?? Well if he was a Dragon of Fire he would be able to make enough peace so that the Chinese and the dragons could live together again.

The Fire Team had not made any peace with the Chinese, but four dragons named Karver, Slether, Friev, and Willow had made some peace with the Chinese. They started a team called the Dragons of Fire. Draco did not really want to be a Dragon of Fire. Instead he would have happily flown back to Li, but this was his only chance to see Li again. There had to be five Dragons of Fire to make enough peace to be with the Chinese again.  The Dragons of Fire also had to fight.  Karver was deputy because he was the best dragon at making peace. Karver made one hundred percent of peace each day. Other dragons could make only one percent of peace each day.  After making too much peace one day, Karver lost his peace powers. So the three Dragons of Fire made a total of only three percent of peace each day.

On the ninth of May, Karver could use a little of his peace powers again. Willow, Draco's mentor, was in fact terrible at mentoring. She promised to show him a special move the next day but instead she showed them ant moves.  He was lost in thought until a thundery voice startled him. It was Firebreath!"Why aren't you doing your daliy flight like Willow told you!?" Firebreath said in a thundery voice.  Draco was about to say "But..." when Firebreath roared spewing fire "Get to your daily flight!!!!!!!!!!!" Hurrying, Draco flew out in the distance. He wished he had an easier life.

Authors note: Some strange memories.... By the way if you could hit Firebreath with one hundred pieces of raw meat you can. Also you can tell what you feel about the first chapter.

6 comments:

  1. Hey bro can I dive in front of you in the story?

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  2. great story! I like the set up w/ the dragons being banished! that sounds like a prequel in the making!

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    1. Thanks i will try to make it way cooler in chapter two!

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  3. nice story blog! i hope you put sign ups soon! i would love to sign up!!

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    1. yOU CAN SIGN UP ANY WHERE I AM PRETTEY SURE JUST SAY
      *SIGN-UP*
      AND WRITE WHATEVER

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  4. I like the idea of this! How do you get so many people to comment and stuff?! I can only get 3 people to comment on one post D: And I only have 3 comments. Thats it not including mine :(

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