Saturday 24 November 2012

Chapter two
Trouble

Draco wanted his last day of training to end.  The daily flight was the last activity of the day. He hurried until he saw his other brother, Flamebird. He was half dragon and half bird. "Hi Flamebird!" said Draco. "Hi Draco!" replied Flamebird. "How ya doing?" said Draco. "Great" replied Flamebird looking up. Just then he felt claws sink into his shoulder. He tumbled out of the sky and was about to hit a tree when he suddenly stopped. He looked up and saw a girl dragon coverd with bright red scales and with hazel eyes.

"Attack of the air dragon!" roared Flamebird laughing. "Dawn that is not funny!" said Draco. "You too, Flamebird," said Draco.  Flamebird stopped laughing. "Why aren't you training with Tornado?" asked Draco clapping off the dust on him. "Tornado said I finished training and I can do anything I want, even attack an evil team member," said Dawn. Draco stared at her blankly.

Just then Flamebird and Dawn frowned. "What?" asked Draco. Dawn pointed to a dragon storming toward him. It was Willow! "Why aren't you doing your daily flight!?" asked Willow screaming. " I was saying hi to my friends and I will get back to it now," said Draco bravely." No! You ruined the last day of training with me!" screamed Willow " You will never be a dragon of fire!" she added. Draco flew away and felt like crying. Flamebird and Dawn flew beside him. "It is ok" said Dawn. " You can visit Slether" recommended Flamebird.  Draco brightend up a bit. He liked visisting Slether.


Author's note: One of my friends asked if he can get a character on and that was Flamebird (His character). And Carrot80948's character is Dawn. Also you can make your character in the comment area. Here are the teams and what they do: Fire team (makes peace and fights), Air team (Gets food for teams), Thunder team ( Helps teams), Evil team ( kills team members. Never helped.) Be sure to comment often!

24 comments:

  1. can i make a character?

    Name: Firewing
    Personality: Cheerful, friendly, funny, goofy.etc
    Appearance: Golden with red blazing wings
    History: Firewing lived and grew up here. Well, nothing else.
    Likes: Flying, adventuring
    Dislikes: Training, grumpy or bad dragons
    Team: Fire Team
    Notes: She is a bit childish and loves to play and joke around. :)

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  2. O.o MUST. MAKE. CHARACTER(s) could I make two?

    This be my draggie oc :P

    Name: Midnight
    Gender: Female
    Appearance: Pretty dark purple dragon with mahoney wings and belly. Turquoise eyes. Toothless's tail (it's fin-like, and helps her fly) She pretty much looks like cynder, with Toothless's tail (search on google if you don't know who cynder is)
    Personality: Courageous, determined, humorous, though mysterious.
    History: Midnight was found as a small dragon, and grew up in the fire team. She wasn't from there though.
    Team: Fire
    Mentor: Silver female dragon with blue eyes named, well, Silver XD
    Notes: Could Midnight be the fastest in the team?


    Second! If only one character, just keep Midnight :)

    Name: Winterwing
    Gender: Female
    Appearance: White, with blue eyes and blue feather tips.
    Personality: Mysterious,but she's humorous and kind once you get to know her.
    History: Winterwing was found in a tree :P
    Team: Fire
    Mentor: Green dragon named Forest
    Notes: Could Winterwing also be half bird and half dragon?

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    1. These characters sound great! I will get in Midnight because i think she was the best character. She will be metioned in chapter five and six.

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    2. Your second one is JUST LIKE DAWN

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  3. Yay for this page :D! This is my dragon :)

    Name: Avonlea
    Gender: Female
    Appearence:smnw‑revised2.jpg (in other words really pretty :3)
    Personality: outgoing, brave, caring, bright, fast, strong, careful, and myserious
    History: She is a normal dragon, but she has been in a couple fights and got a scar across her eye. She carries around a necklace, it glows in the dark and has no origin known by anone but her..
    Team: Fire
    Mentor: I seriously don't know. You can choose :)well, shes almost not an apprentice anymore, so I guess she doesn't need one.
    Notes: Can she be friends with Draco?

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  4. Avonlea will be in the story bit ;ater on in the story :)

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    1. thank you :) she kinda looks exatly like my profilr pic :D

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  5. Shall sign-up~ c:

    Name: Jewel
    Gender: Female
    Animal: Dragon
    Appearance: Beautiful dark purple female dragon with green eyes and long blood red claws and spikes on wings.
    Personality: Serious, sarcastic, fast, smart, cruel, ambitious, independent, natural leader, hostile, stubborn.
    Strengths: Revenge, fighting, killing, hunting, planning, flying, stealth.
    Weaknesses: Has a REALLY bad temper
    History: Jewel was once on the Fire team and her mother and father died in a battle against the evil team. She blamed the Fire team about it because she thought their weakness was the cause of her parents' death. Angry, Jewel joined the evil team and hates the Fire team, and she's one of the best fighters.
    Team: Whichever is the most evil team
    Mentor: None, she's done training

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    1. Jewel will be in the story and thanks for making a character!

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  6. hmm.. Do you know which chapter exactly Avonlea will be in?

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    1. Yay! If you check out "Everything You Need To Know About Dragons - And More!" you will see my dragon's actual species.

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