Monday 23 December 2013


Chapter eighteen

Dawn’s Return

 

“I am so lonely.  I wish that someone was out of the Air Hole and they could help me,” Dawn said to herself. She sat on Silky Hills.  Just then, she heard someone fall down. Dawn ran and ran to where she had heard the sound. Dawn’s ears could hear far away. Dawn saw some Evil Team dragons attacking her friend, Draco.

 

“Hey, get away from him!” Dawn yelled at them. The Evil Team dragons looked at Dawn and sneered. “Who are you, loser?” asked one of the Evil Team dragons. The other Evil Team dragons laughed. “I am Dawn, and I will use my cat powers!” Dawn said. The Evil Team dragons laughed even harder and Draco was mad. Just then, an Evil Team dragon ran to Dawn and had his fist up high, but he fell down. Dawn was psychic and had cat powers. She also had a magical pet fox.

 Dawn raised up her hand and cats came out of it hitting the Evil Team dragons. “Hey stop! Ow that cat has big fangs!” “Why does that cat have a sombrero?” “Why does that cat have rainbow farts?” yelled some of the Evil Team dragons. Jewel, the dragon that had tackled Draco was mad. She growled and lunged at Dawn.  Dawn became a cat, and Jewel missed Dawn.

“Hey Drac- oh my god!” said Firewing. Flamebird laughed and rolled on the floor. “Ok that is enough; it is show time!” said Flamebird. Flamebird hit Shadow, the leader of Evil Team. Firewing bit Cackle, an old Evil Team leader.  Draco attacked Jewel with Dawn, who was an amazing acrobatic cat.

 

“This sucks.  Cats are fat!” said Shadow. Just then, a flying fox that can fly bit Shadow. Shadow screamed then cried.

 The Evil Team dragons started retreating, holding their leader. “Guess who are the losers and fat dragons?  You!” yelled the magical flying fox who was eating popcorn.  One dragon named Fatso didn’t cry.  The rest got mad or cried. Jewel and Cackle were so mad, Draco thought their heads were going to explode because if an Evil Team dragon gets very mad, their heads explode. That is why 56 Evil Team dragons die every year (of course, some are killed by other dragons or they get old).

 

“How did you do that?” asked Firewing, amazed. Dawn turned back to a dragon and said “Cat magic!” “I don’t think that is legit,” said Draco. “If you think I am wrong, go to Mr. Cat,” Dawn said. They all laughed. Suddenly, cats fell from the sky and meowed. Draco got scared. “Are you ok Draco?  It might be another image,” Dawn said. “That might be true,” Draco said.

 

Draco and his friends got enough silk for the tent and went back to Blue Ribbon Waterfall. Draco was scared of two things now, cats and the Grass Whistler.

 

Author’s Note: Dawn is Elizabeth’s character (aka my sister) If you don’t get Dawn go to chapter 2.  Also, speaking of her, she has a blog called The Quest for No Rain. The Address is thequestfornorain.blogspot.com. I Hope you enjoyed this chapter.

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